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2008-06-08, 08:00 上午

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思念宝贝

思念宝贝

六月的雨啊

总是这样绵绵密密

妈妈的心呀

也是这样惆怅悠悠

亲爱的宝贝

可知可知妈妈在深深地把你思念

多想多想听你风铃般清脆的笑

多想多想吻你娇嫩如花的脸

多想多想看你清澈如水的眼眸

多想多想温柔怜惜地揽你入怀

多想多想给你冲一瓶温度适中的奶

多想多想给你穿上那双粉红色的鞋

多想多想让你在堆满了泡泡的澡盆里尽情地戏水

多想多想让阳台上挂满你小小可爱的衣服

多想多想让你在牙齿痒痒的时候狠狠地咬我的手臂

多想多想把你背在背上快乐地跟爸爸捉迷藏

可是可是妈妈却是如此的渺小无能

纵然万般不舍

只也能无奈地把你丢给家中年迈的爷爷奶奶

小小的你却是多么的懂事啊

看着妈妈收拾行李

哭着叫着怎么都想挣脱奶奶的手

扑向妈妈的怀抱

你知道知道妈妈又要像爸爸一样离开你

你好伤心

好不习惯爸爸妈妈不在身边的日子

在广东出生的你

一直在爸爸妈妈的呵护下长到一岁多

广东的夜晚很喧嚣

灯光很亮

你是个惹人疼爱的孩子

隔壁的爷爷奶奶

店里来来往往的叔叔阿姨

他们都那么喜欢抱你

逗你笑逗你玩

你是那么活泼那么喜欢热闹

可是

爸爸妈妈却残忍地叫小小的你去接受另外一种生活

家里的夜晚多静呀

家里也没有那么多叔叔阿姨陪你玩

更伤心的是

爸爸在你还没有完全接受奶奶的时候

就偷偷地跑掉了

房间里浴室里厕所里楼上屋前院后

你拖着奶奶的手到处都找遍了

爸爸像骗子一样躲掉你把你丢在家里

妈妈好不容易回来一趟

却不是回来陪你的

妈妈也像爸爸上次送你回来一样

默默的收拾行李

然后屋前院后楼上楼下

叫你到处都找不着

妈妈好坏呀

明明知道回来却不能陪你

却还是回来了

然后又狠心地走掉

让小小的你独自伤心流泪承受不舍

可是自私的妈妈真的好想好想你

雨还在没完没了的下着

思念还在无止无休的漫延

亲爱的宝贝

请原谅爸爸妈妈

爸爸妈妈像千千万万个平凡的父母一样

想创造更好的事业

打造更好的生活

给你更好的未来

宝贝吻你在梦里

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2008-06-08, 08:08 上午

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Re: 思念宝贝

拙笨的文字，希望得到各位编辑老师和文友的指教~谢谢！祝节日快乐~

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2008-06-11, 10:30 上午

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Re: 思念宝贝

把一个母亲对宝贝的思念表达的很透彻,跃然纸上,个人认为写得很好,加油!

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2008-06-12, 11:39 上午

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Re: 思念宝贝

终于有人看了我的文字，真的好感谢你~谢谢你的回复，谢谢你的鼓励！我会好好加油的~

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2008-06-12, 03:04 下午

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Re: 思念宝贝

不太适合（我们多发20行内的短诗），作者可以自行处理。谢谢你的支持。

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2008-11-06, 05:02 上午

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